商務英語口語視頻 (初級) 50 Writing Relevant and Concise Messages

　　Did you see the message posted on the bulletin board, Mark?

　　Mark

　　I saw something there this morning, but I didn't pay attention to it. Why?

　　Linda

　　I just thought it was a strange message.

　　Linda

　　For one thing, I don't think the content is relevant to our office.

　　Linda

　　I was also offended by the sexist language.

　　Mark

　　What was the topic of the message?

　　Linda

　　The key point was criticizing the company's lack of employee accountability.

　　Linda

　　But the message was several pages long. I didn't read the whole thing.

　　Mark

　　Sounds like someone needs to learn how to make their messages more concise.