托福寫(xiě)作高分滿(mǎn)分范文點(diǎn)評(píng)和思路解析：二十世紀(jì)值得銘記的改變

　　What is the change that should be remembered about the twentieth century?

　　The twentieth century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered about the twentieth century? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

　　寫(xiě)作思路展開(kāi)結(jié)構(gòu)分析

　　這算是一道紀(jì)念過(guò)去的題目，二十世紀(jì)的確發(fā)生了很多改變，而這些改變也對(duì)如今的世界產(chǎn)生了巨大的影響。所以大家既可以從世界范圍上往大了去想，也可以結(jié)合自己的日常生活來(lái)說(shuō)，可以發(fā)揮的余地還是很大的。比如從自己國(guó)家來(lái)寫(xiě)的話(huà)，大家可以寫(xiě)中國(guó)的巨大變革(經(jīng)濟(jì)上、政治上、文化上的變化)等等。

　　本話(huà)題高分范文賞析

　　In the last century, the speed at which technology is developing has increased at a phenomenal rate. If someone living one hundred years ago could see the world today, they would think they were peering onto the set of a science fiction movie. Of all of the inventions created in this time period, I believe that the computer and the Internet should be remembered above all others. The first reason why I believe that the computer and the Internet are so important to history is because they allow, for the first time ever, all of the people in the world to share their information. If I can speak Italian, I can access all of the websites from Italy. If I have a working knowledge of Japanese, the wealth of Japan's information is at my fingertips. The Internet connects people and ideas, therefore allowing everyone to increase his/her knowledge.

　　The computer also allows us to make complex calculations with the greatest of ease. A century ago, it would have taken an expert ten months to work out some of the more intricate problems that math and science provide us with. However, with computers, these problems are solved within seconds. Computers also speed up other aspects of our lives. Most young people living in developed nations can type faster than they can handwrite. This, of course, speeds up the education process as well as the business world. Finally, the computer and the Internet are very important to the twentieth century because of its effect on the entertainment industry. Computers have allowed for complex video games to be created, which are the current craze in most cultures. Teenagers everywhere spend countless hours playing these games, and gain great enjoyment from them. For those not interested in video games, the computer has also allowed for great advances in the movie industry. Special effects are now commonplace in every modern movie we watch. They make movies more realistic and exciting.

　　In brief, I believe that when future generations look back on the twentieth century's inventions, they will be most impressed with the computer and the Internet, as it has changed the way we view the world and interact with each other.