Last Monday, When school ended, I came back home with some of my classmates. On the way, we saw an old woman lying on the ground. Her leg was badly hurt and couldn’t get up. We hurried to help her. We wanted to get in touch with her family member, but she was too weak to say a word. Lin Lao called 120 and asked for help. A moment later, an ambulance came and took her to the hospital. I got home late that day. My mum asked me why I was late. I told her everything. She was very glad and said, “What a helpful boy you are! You did a good thing. When someone is in trouble, we should try our best to help him.” It’s good to help others. I felt very happy.
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
第五檔:(9—10分)能寫(xiě)明全部要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言基本無(wú)誤或有少量拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,行文流暢,表達(dá)清楚。
第四檔:(7—8分) 能寫(xiě)明大部分要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言有一些錯(cuò)誤(句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤1—2處),但行文基本流暢,表達(dá)基本清楚。
第三檔:(5—6分) 能寫(xiě)明一些要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多(句子結(jié)構(gòu)或動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤3—4處),但意思基本連貫,表達(dá)基本清楚。
第二檔:(3—4分) 能寫(xiě)出少數(shù)要點(diǎn),語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多,意思不連貫,影響意思表達(dá)。
第一檔:(1—2分) 只能寫(xiě)出若干詞語(yǔ),無(wú)可讀的句子。
0分: 未傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息;所寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容與要求無(wú)關(guān);無(wú)法看清。